Do you wish someone could look at your messaging and figure out what isn't quite landing?

Now's your chance.

INTRODUCING: MY BUSINESS BREAKTHROUGH AUDIT
Giving you the outside perspective you need on the messaging that drives your sales.

This audit is customized to you. You'll walk away with actionable steps to build real relationships with your audience so they're excited to buy from you not just once, but over and over again.
What it is:

A comprehensive review of where your message is losing people right now. Pick one core asset you're struggling with (2 max), and I tell you how I'd fix. Nothing cookie cutter. All custom to you & your business.

 Examples of assets include: your lead magnet, welcome email sequence or sales emails, a landing page, or your website homepage.

Receive a ~20 minute personalized video audit where I break down what’s working & what could you could improve in your messaging to move the needle in your business.

Delivered privately to your inbox within 3 - 5 business days.

You get clarity on the unique messaging angles that set you apart & make you the obvious choice for your clients.


If you’re an ambitious entrepreneur who's ready to clarify your message, revive your voice & connect deeply with your people so they stay customers for life, then this audit is for you!


“Rachel's guidance really made a difference for my business. Now I'm excited to keep taking action because I have more clarity in my message that I can use in my content."

Amy
Nutritional Therapy Practitioner

“After working with Rachel, I know exactly where to send people — a lead magnet I boldly share! 


Rachel was a great sounding board, helping me get all my ideas out of my head. Now I feel aligned & confident because I know I have a system that brings people in and warms them up with the real, genuine me … The time saved & mental clarity I gained was well worth it for me and my clients!”

Melanie
Business & Life Coach

“My email communications life is SO much more peaceful since working with Rachel. She truly understands my voice, and she understands how I want to communicate with my audience. I feel like I am communicating with my followers more effectively. There has definitely been a visible increase in interaction.”

Katherine
Graphic Designer & Etsy Seller

“I just finished reading the revised email sequence, and I just wanted to say THANK YOU. You did such a fantastic job. I love it! It is so much more engaging with delightful storytelling. I so appreciate your work on this and am excited to share it.”

Stephanie
Wedding Photographer

Let's capture what makes you YOU (and reach your business goals!)
If your content isn't landing the way you know it could, here's what's usually missing: 

Your unique angle. 

Your way of seeing the world that no one else does. 

When that's woven into your messaging, your audience stops scrolling, starts paying attention, and actually gets excited to buy from you. 

That's what a Business Breakthrough Audit does for you.

 

I'm Rachel Jones, and I spent 7 years as a sports journalist asking the right questions to uncover the real stories. Now I use that same skill to find what makes you & your business impossible to ignore.

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FAQs
  • What happens after I purchase?
    You’ll be taken right to a questionnaire where you’ll answer several key questions about your business, your goals, and marketing efforts. Please complete ASAP. (The link will also be in your confirmation email).

    Then I’ll dig into your info and personally record your video (screen share included). I'll walk you through the opportunities I see for you to build momentum and start growing your business again.

    Your video will land in your inbox in 3-5 business days.
  • What kinds of things will you review?
    Every audit is customized based on what you share. Nothing cookie cutter.

    Don’t just dump all your assets in the form though; focus on your business goals! With that said, here are some things I can review:

    → Your lead magnet, welcome sequence + email list growth strategy
    → Your visibility touch points (podcast, email, bundles or summits, social, etc.)
    → Your offer positioning + customer journey flow
    → Your website homepage + brand voice consistency
    → Where you’re watering down your story + core message
  • Is this a live call?
    No. It’s all done asynchronously. We're keeping this easy!

    You fill out the questionnaire, I review your business behind the scenes, and you get your video with personalized feedback delivered within 3 - 5 business days!
  • Will you pitch me something after?
    Only if I truly believe it would help you. If I think my done-for-you marketing support is a good fit for where your business is, I’ll let you know, and you’re always free to say no. The audit is yours to keep regardless.
  • Give it to me straight. Is this for me?
    If you’re a service-based entrepreneur or coach who works hard and isn’t drawing in the clients (or the sales) you want, the short answer is yes.

    I don't create anything new for you in this audit.

    You get my eyes on your business to ensure what you're saying in emails, on social media, your website (wherever you show up) is clear and unmistakably you so your business actually grows.

  • Total payment
  • 1xBusiness Breakthrough Audit$197
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